Prologue : Where (To Hear Silence)

January 13, 2009

Jedi’s Edit:  I’ve also made a page for it. I’ll update it on the main site (This), and on the page. FYI, my favorite drama story is “Mine Forever” by “Fate”. The link is on the offical page.  Comment if you want me to continue.

Authors Note : This is not a perfect story, and I invite any constructive critisizm. This may be different from other stories on this site, but I hope you enjoy it.

Prologue: Where?

To hear Silence

By Ankita

Nothing left.

A cloud of darkness was upon us. No other choice.

None more. 

“Follow Xizor in now!”, the words almost inaudible to my weakened senses.

I shook with the pain, the fear of what was happening to me.   I gazed into the darkness thinking.

What would have Nikolai done? If he was here, he probably would’ve taken charge. He would’ve gotten everyone out. If Nikolai was here…

“I do suggest you follow the given instructions”, the same menacing voice spoke, “You do want to get away safely , do you not?”.

How can he ever talk about safety. After all he’s done, to me, to Nikolai and to so many other people. How can he!

A scream ripped through my tightly clenched teeth, resisting my request, to not giving away my anguish. I’ve never been one to overly obsess over pride, let alone now, but could I stand to give the man who had taken everything away, the satisfaction of seeing my weakness?  

I began to hyperventilate, my teeth chattering, my eyes blinking erratically, my body losing control.

“Now now, calm yourself Nisha. You wouldn’t want Nikolai to see you this way, would you?”, the voice said mockingly.

Nikolai, oh Nikolai. Where are you? Help me be strong, please.

My body continued to rattle like crazy, unconsciously reacting to the mention of Nikolai’s name.

“Sir, she’s not in her right mind. We may have to use anesthesia”, a frightened voice spoke nervously.

 Change in point of voice:


I could feel the fear in the soldiers voice. Ahh, fear.  Always a useful tool, but now isn’t the time. Sometimes, even being Vladimier Czvier is a tiring job.         

“Very well, give her a shot, and let us go”, I spoke.        

I reached out to the soldiers mind. It recoiled from my very presence, but somehow, somehow I managed to dispel his fear, at least for the time being.

“Very good sir!”, the soldier replied, somewhat calmer.

Change in point of view : 

As I heard Vla–, him, give orders to knock me out, I shook in a frightened fervor. What now? I’ve never been a perfect person..but honestly, what have I done to deserve this?

“Excuse me ma’am, this may hurt but it shall take but a second. We’ll arrive at our destination soon enough, and you’ll  be revived”, the soldier said tentatively.

“I’ll see you later…”, and with that He, he walked away, too far for my diluted sight to see.

They are taking me away! Away, to some god knows where place! Away from Nikolai. Away…..

“Don’t do this! Pleas—“, I try to cry out, but my eyes are already closing.

Silence ensures.

 

 

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4 Comments Add your own

  • 1. hockey632  |  January 13, 2009 at 12:38 am

    This is Trickster.. I liked, I liked the end… Chills.

    Reply
  • 2. foxtails0  |  January 13, 2009 at 12:40 am

    wow… more is coming out later, right? cant wait.

    Reply
  • 3. themouse10  |  January 13, 2009 at 12:40 am

    Nice Prologue Ankita i Love it :)

    Reply
  • 4. purpur5222  |  January 13, 2009 at 12:44 am

    nice 8-)

    Reply

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